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21 Common Lens Mistakes (that can be easily fixed)

Bonnie Diczhazy by on Thu, Nov 10th, 2011

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This is a super reminder for getting your holiday lenses in tip top shape!

What makes a great lens?

I mean a really, really out of the ball park, share with your friends, amazing work of art?

The answer to this question is a lot simpler then you think.

A few months ago ProBlogger posted this article: Eliminate 21 Reputation-Crushing Writing Mistakes from Your Blog and it’s a big eye opener as all 21 mistakes can be applied to a lens as well as a blog.

Fixing these common lens mistakes can be the difference between a good lens and a great one. Let’s go through the list.

#1: You have no proverbial welcome mat.
Your identity on Squidoo can make or break you. Provide an empty, sloppy or spammy bio page and your readers will walk away. On the other hand if you establish yourself as a professional, expert hobbyist or knowledgeable in your field you’ll get an automatic nod of approval. People want to know who they are getting their information from. No one is going to read an article written by a blank faceless bio page.

#2 Too many FAQ’s make for a boring lens.
Everyone (even my 78 year old Aunt) knows about WikiPedia. It’s an excellent source for facts and basic information. If I want to know what year Cold Stone Creamery opened their first store I’ll look on WikiPedia. However if I want to find the best ice cream shoppes in Butte, Montana I’ll want some personal reviews. That’s where a lens can become the most valuable source of information on the web. Give readers something they can’t find on WikiPedia.

#3 Answer the 5 W’s and you’ll be a hit with your readers.
Who? What? When? Why? Where? How?
If you’re sharing a lens about your best friends band these questions are a must. People want to know exactly what the scoop is in a nice organized fashion. This does not mean you need to sacrifice creativity, it just means that you need to incorporate the information that your readers need on your lens.

#4 Photos are a BIG hit on the internet, use them…wisely.
The best photo you can use on a lens is one you take yourself. Of course that’s not always possible. The second best way to show off a photo is to use the Creative Commons. Sharing real photos means that your lens has credibility and it could even give your lens an SEO boost. Just be sure to credit any image you do use.

#5 The 4 line paragraph rule.
This is a favorite tip with me. Long drawn out paragraphs do not belong on the web. Follow the 4 line paragraph rule and your readers will thank you. A 4 line paragraph is visually more appealing and grammatically more digestible.

#6 The Goldilocks rule.
Keep your titles short, but not too short. This rule is a bit more flexible on Squidoo (as opposed to blogs) because sometimes a longer title is needed to convey the content of a lens. Good use of subtitles is also a smart practice.

#7 Provide a byline.
Luckily Squidoo does an excellent job of showing your reader who you are by providing a link to your bio page on the right hand side bar of every lens. You can also add an “About Me” module at the bottom of your lens as a “Squidoo Style” byline.

#8 Incomplete sentences.
No one. Likes. To read. Weird and incomplete thoughts. Unless of course. You’re William Shatner. He can do it.

#9 Blundering your FAQ’s.
Saying that Thanksgiving falls on the second Thursday of November or that the average snow fall in Florida is 58″ per year will not only garner you weird looks but also discredit your expertise. Check your facts before your publish.

#10 Typos that are actual words.
It’s easy to pick up that “wongderful” should actually be spelled “wonderful” thanks to spell check but what about typos that are actual words? Saying…”Chef Feeble is making your a good dinner” is a bit harder to pick up because “your” won’t get noticed by your spell checker.

#11 Ah… excessive/incorrect punctuation!
I am a self proclaimed exclamation point junky but even I know when to stop. Using !?! or !!!! after every sentence is extreme, annoying and will irritate your readers. So tone it down a notch and use punctuation marks wisely.

#12 Inconsistencies in your lens.
Inconsistencies are a tiny thing that can become a big problem on a lens. For example, if you’re talking about “Twilight” and refer to Bella’s boyfriend as Edward in one sentence, then Eddie in the next you’ll confuse and bewilder your readers. A less obvious example is the use of measurements. Don’t flip between using 12″ and a foot. Consistency makes for an easy and more logical read.

#13 Vagueness
Here is the dictionary definition of vague: 1. not clearly or explicitly stated or expressed. No one wants to read vague lenses. So keep editing your lens until you’ve fleshed out the most concise and clear content on your topic.

#14 Plurals and Possessives.
It’s really easy to confuse your plurals and possessives. So watch your grammar and when in doubt consult a style guide.

#15 Too many links.
Having too many links (especially in a Text Module) can be distracting so be sure to include only the most relevant and useful links. You can always use the Link List Module to add more relevant links as it creates a visually appealing directory style list. Here’s an example of a good Link List in action.

#16 Quotation Mark Misuse.
Know when to use “quotation marks” and when not to. Putting too many “words” into “quotes” looks strange and unprofessional.

#17 Direct Quote Blunders.
Anytime you quote from another source be sure to cite that source. Simple as that. Also be aware of how much quoted text you are using. You can read more about using direct quotes in the Squidoo Scroll of Originality.

#18 Word Errors.
It’s easy to mix up words…whether vs. weather, effect vs. affect and finance vs. fiancée (OK, that’s an easy one but you get the picture). Make sure you are using the correct word.

#19 Using too many UPPERCASE, Bolded and italicized words.
We all know that WRITING IN CAPS IS CONSIDERED SHOUTING, but also be sure to watch your Bolded and italicized words. Too many extras can make a lens look sloppy and unprofessional.

#20 CSS abuse.
Less is more on a lens. Having too many fancy fonts, colored boxes and extra coding can distract from your content. CSS is also time consuming to produce. Instead use a Squidoo theme to add style to your lens. Here are 3 of our newest themes to play with.

#21 Publishing a first draft.
This applies a bit more to blogs as it’s easy to shoot off a rant without thinking it through. However, it can also be a good lesson for your lenses too. After you craft your lens do a complete read through before you publish. I can guarantee that you’ll find some places that you can improve.

These small lens fixes can really give you a leg up in terms of quality. If you had to write a #22 to this list what would it be?

Bonnie Diczhazy (bdkz) is a community organizer here on Squidoo. She is Chief RocketSquid and manages the Giant Squid VIP Writers program.

Comments:

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/lemonsqueezy lemonsqueezy

    Great list!
     
    #10 – I actually incorrectly spelled the author’s name once:  Hannah Swenson.  Another lensmaster caught it and sent me an email.  (Thank you)
     
    #11 – I love to use “…” to create pauses in my text.  I try not to do it, but sometimes… you know… I just can’t help it. ;-)

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/bdkz Bonnie Diczhazy

      I’ve had my share of typos too! It’s easy to miss things when you are going fast.

      • http://www.squidoo.com Kimberly Dawn Wells

        I occasionally misspell my own name when I type too fast. 
        ~Kimbelry.

        • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/bdkz Bonnie Diczhazy

          I always misspell Kimberly’s name when I type too fast too! Luckily my own name is pretty easy.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Creative_Butterfly Creative_Butterfly

    That’s really helpful. All basic rules that everyone seems to forget

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/veryirie veryirie

    As a newbie, I’m seeing already I need to add a little more beef to my links list. First thing would be for me to change the title from link list. uh oh… This has been very helpful!

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/bdkz Bonnie Diczhazy

      You’re welcome! And yes we always recommend that you change the generic module titles like “Link List” to something that suits your lens : )

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/NightMagic NightMagic

    These are great tips.  Many of them I do but I can now incorporate the ones I haven’t done  to make my lenses better.  I’ve made a few spelling errors.  Luckily another squid was nice enough to point it out.  Thank goodness for people like them.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/thebrentster thebrentster

    Awesome post.  Thanks for sharing!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/MarkUpshaw MarkUpshaw

    Great post. I just posted this on my board to review prior to each new submission. Thx.

    • Megan Casey

      That’s dedication! 

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/signdesign signdesign

    Great ideas here! Thanks so much!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/hysongdesigns hysongdesigns

    good thoughts for new and old authors. my #22 would be too many sales modules in what looks like just a content lens. Yes I know we are all here to make money (or at least a lot of us are) but when I open a lens and it seems like there is an Amazon, Zazzle or some other sales lens for every couple of sentances, well that really turns me off. It’s different of course if the purpose of the lens is to show you items for sale, then I expect it.

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/bdkz Bonnie Diczhazy

      Great point! Rather then making a “sales” lens it’s better to create a content rich lens then build in some sales modules that compliment the content.

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Reinfire Reinfire

      I second this. When I go to a lens it’s because I want to get information, and when I end up on a page that’s just a compilation of links to other places and attempts to sell me things I get really annoyed. Yes, it’s helpful to link to related resources, but that shouldn’t be the content of the entire lens. (Sorry, pet peeve here.)

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/giltotherescue giltotherescue

      THIS is so spot on.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/iMANDY iMANDY

    Excellent post! I enjoyed reading all points of reference. Thank you for such great reminders and information. :)

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/iMANDY iMANDY

    Oh and my #22 would be, to ensure that you kindly respond to all comments on your lenses or bio page. After all, this is what makes the Squidoo world go around!

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/bdkz Bonnie Diczhazy

      That’s a good one Mandy!

  • Megan Casey

    My favorite post of the day. So many takeaways.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/NCdevilgrl NCdevilgrl

    ^5!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/dustytoes dustytoes

    My number 22 would be to be accepting of constructive criticism and help from other (more experienced) lensmasters.  I have benefited from this.  Thanks for making this helpful list.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/spiritartist spiritartist

    My # 22 would be to make separate focused lenses instead of keep adding to an existing one. In other words, K.I.S.S. it (Keep it sensationally simple). Seems like the lenses that are most successful have very clear (sometimes narrow) and direct topic content. I’m sure I could pare down some and create additional ones with several of mine. 

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/bdkz Bonnie Diczhazy

      I am a HUGE fan of K.I.S.S!

    • http://buildingordinary.blogspot.com Kathryn Grace

      I’ve begun this with some of my lenses. I tried to put too much information into my lenses in the beginning. The best lenses I see are relatively short, answer my questions, and stay on point.

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/olpampam olpampam

      Yes, this is a good one.  I’ve been learning about the value of having short lenses that link together as opposed to one large lens.

  • http://buildingordinary.blogspot.com Kathryn Grace

    #22: When you make an assertion, back it up. Example: “The majority of Squidoo users prefer green to blue.” Link to the study that proved this.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/kevinw1 kevinw1

    LOL on #10, about incorrect words your spellchecker won’t catch. The last sentence in #9 is “Check your facts before your publish.” Spot the deliberate mistake?

    • http://buildingordinary.blogspot.com Kathryn Grace

      Nice catch. Think Bonnie did that deliberately?

  • http://www.facebook.com/momwithahook Sara Duggan

    Thank You Bonnie for this. All fantastic points. It is rather enlightening when I see my earlier lenses as opposed to ones I make now. One of my top lenses is the crochet hats one and when that one was first made it was just a collection of links I wanted to remind myself of.
    The more I write on squidoo the more my style changes – I love learning from people who care about quality content and style.

    • http://www.squidoo.com Megan Casey, Cofounder

      I like this a lot.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/goo2eyes goo2eyes

    Ouch, I think I made some blunders in my first lenses but I tried to improve the rest. Would you care to check my lenses? Some are funny that I laugh whenever I read them. Maybe, there is room for some improvement. Blogging is addictive. Suddenly I am in the top 3 of SquidooSpiritleaderboard. Great!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Norma_Budden Norma_Budden

    I recognize a significant difference between my initial lenses and those I’ve published over recent months. I know I certainly have learned a lot over the past couple of years.

    If I had to add a #22 to the above list, I would say that a person must have a great URL combined with a catchy title.

  • http://luminosity.livejournal.com Luminosity

    Thanks for Sharing.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/ClassyGals ClassyGals

    Great advice, Bonnie. My 22nd would be don’t make your lens so long that it takes forever to load. When I come across a lens like this I can’t help but to lose patience and leave. It’s a shame because the lensmaster often puts so much work into it.

    • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/bdkz Bonnie Diczhazy

      That’s great advice!

  • http://twitter.com/MerchantsCenter Melanie James

    I just made my first lens, thanks for these tips:)

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/hobo_crvr hobo_crvr

    This list is Awesome! Will be big help in putting together my first lens. Thank you.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/dfishbac dfishbac

    Great advise. Thanks.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/lynnrdavis lynnrdavis

    Very nice tips Thank you!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/aprilmc aprilmc

    Great tips. Of course, now I’ve read this I’ll began to suffer Lens inadequacy issues. :)

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/profilesincolor profilesincolor

    Good reminders! Thank you! :-)

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Cheryl57 Cheryl57

    Thank you for the excellent common sense tips!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/hsherry hsherry

    Thanks for the reminders that even lenses should have great writing!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Retro_Loco Retro_Loco

    These tips are excellent! I will be referring to these tips as a checklist when editing my existing lenses and before publishing new ones. I am giving a major makeover to all of my lenses before publishing anything new, and your advice is going to be a huge help — thank you so much!

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/KellyMartinSpeaks KellyMartinSpeaks

    Really good tips, thanks a lot, this will help me heaps.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/darciefrench darciefrench

    Thanks Bonnie #22 would be “don’t spam your own guestbook and duels mods with self-made visitor comments” – it makes the information on the lens, and the lensmaster, appear inauthentic.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/nightcats nightcats

    Excellent points, one and all. I know I have been guilty of some of them (if not all!) from time to time.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Judy_Filarecki Judy_Filarecki

    I just read a lens that had a few sentences in the beginning by the author and then in between many sale items, there were two long explanations of the topic. At the apparent end of each of these sections, it said “Click to read the rest of this WIKI Article.” Doesn’t this conflict with the policy of original material and also quoting word for word (without quotation marks) giving the appearance that it is your own words?

    • http://buildingordinary.blogspot.com Kathryn Grace

      The reader should always be notified at the beginning of quoted material. I recently ran across a travel lens in which the lensmaster had inserted almost an entire paragraph from the web site of one of the attractions she was highlighting. I recognized the text and asked the lensmaster to attribute and mark the quoted material. Throughout the lens, the writer’s voice changed from one with impeccable grammar and syntax to one with glaring errors, as well as from informal to more formal. I couldn’t help wondering if some of the other copy were also not her own. This sort of omission–or commission, depending how you look at it–gives Squidoo a bad reputation.

      • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Judy_Filarecki Judy_Filarecki

        I looked at 4 of her other lenses, and they all had extensive material from Wikipedia. As you said: “–gives Squidoo a bad reputation.” 1% was original writing, 30% was Wiki and 69% was selling items. I’m not impressed.

  • http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/DecoratingforEvents DecoratingforEvents

    Excellent tips Bonnie! It’s easy to get in a hurry and abuse a few you mentioned. Proofing helps and my lensmaster friends are the best help! 

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